the plain ride
”Can I check your passport?” he asked ”Oh yes yes” I said. ”I will just get it out of my bag, 1 second here you go”. ”why thankyou you may go through have a lovely flight said the security man. Thankyou I said.
It was a long time on the plain but it was a good experience. I would need to get used to it especially if I will be doing it once a month I thought to my self.
Look at that water fall it even has a rainbow forming over it.
”Everyone please remain seated while we land thankyou”.
annalie56mps
hello Matilda I loved how you said that the waterfall had a rainbow forming over it it really captured a picture in my mind there are only a few things that you could work on, 1 instead of thankyou I said you could have added speech-marks (same with have a lovely flight) 2 plane is spelt wrong! but other than those few things you did really well
sincerely Annie!